script

We wrote the first draft of the script and then we showed it to John. The script was very long and was very basic. We then looked at a film called The Limey. We looked at how the film is broken up by past and present events. We also saw how somethings were left out but we knew they were happening e.g. when the main character shoots at a gang that have beaten him up inside a warehouse. We do not see the killings but we see the shots being fired. We decided to incorporate this into the new script.

Here is a link to the script:
http://clearskyfilmsfirstscript.blogspot.com/

This is much better because it's cut down and is more filmic. The initial story follows the main character as he is about to have a racist tattoo removed. During his journey he remembers when he was apart of a skinhead gang.